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Fashion Show on Monroe 1 by =Tigga76:iconTigga76:


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Submitted: May 18, 2007
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Resolution: 600×470
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This is one of my latests projects for the place where I (kinda) work Ebony World Productions. I was aiming for the simple look and just threw all of the info text (the stuff in the bottom right corner) in at the last minute so I could get it approoved. Unfortunately the lady in charge of the modeling didn't like it so it was back to the drawing board where I came up with this. [link]
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I LOVE the tones and general composition of this. My only nitpicks would be that the model looks a little like she is being cramped in by the letters, and the word truth is not easily viewable.

Nits aside, your typography, font-face choice and hierarchy of elements are spot on.

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Andrew
Thanks for the crit. The lady didn't like this one at all though. She thought it was too simple and plain. Like I said in the description the letters were thrown on at the last minute anyway but I see what you were saying. I might go back and polish this one if I feel it.

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Personally, I think it's tight. My guess is she wanted that "DIVAAA" look. It still looks pro.

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Andrew
This is one of my favorites, very hip but still kept clean and simple.

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I like this one too but if you read the gallery description you'll see what's up with it. Thanks for the comment.

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you did an amazing job with the text and the complimentary colors.. bravo

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Why thank you. I must note that the photo wasn't taken by me but the design is all mine.

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